The graph below shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012

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The bar graph illustrates the
number
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of
boys
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and
girls
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playing 6 types of sports in a town in a single year.
Overall
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,
boys
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prefer tennis and
football
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the most.
On the other hand
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,
girls
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love to play badminton & swimming mostly.
Hockey
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is the least famous sport in the town. Specifically,
football
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is the most famous sport for
boys
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which shows the highest value, 60.
Also
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, nearly 50
boys
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played tennis which was the second highest. Less
boys
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played badminton and
hockey
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which shows the
number
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30 or below. In
football
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, the difference between the
number
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of
boys
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and
girls
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is the highest; 60
boys
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played it
whereas
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girls
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played only 20.
On the other hand
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, about 90
girls
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enjoyed swimming and badminton of which 50 went swimming. Only 50 people went for cycling,
football
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and
hockey
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.
Hockey
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shows the least
number
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, 10. From the graph, we can
also
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see that
boys
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played sport more than
girls
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by
number
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in 2012.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, boys, girls, football, hockey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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