The graph below shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of boys
and girls
playing 6 types of sports in a town in a single year.
Overall
, boys
prefer tennis and football
the most. On the other hand
, girls
love to play badminton & swimming mostly. Hockey
is the least famous sport in the town.
Specifically, football
is the most famous sport for boys
which shows the highest value, 60. Also
, nearly 50 boys
played tennis which was the second highest. Less boys
played badminton and hockey
which shows the number
30 or below. In football
, the difference between the number
of boys
and girls
is the highest; 60 boys
played it whereas
girls
played only 20.
On the other hand
, about 90 girls
enjoyed swimming and badminton of which 50 went swimming.
Only 50 people went for cycling, football
and hockey
. Hockey
shows the least number
, 10. From the graph, we can also
see that boys
played sport more than girls
by number
in 2012.Submitted by tanvir0507 on
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