The graphs below show the number of visitors to two cities in a given year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The trends illustrate information about the amount of tourists who
visted
Caribbean Correct your spelling
visited
island
in a period of 7 years from 2010 to 2017.In overview, Fix the agreement mistake
islands
all
millions of guests Correct determiner usage
apply
such
as those who stayed on cruise
ships
, island
and total experienced an increase from the beginning until the end of the period.
To start with, Fix the agreement mistake
islands
vistors
who lived on Correct your spelling
visitors
cruise
ships
in 2010, there were about 0.25 million
and increased to 0.5 in one year while
,
those who were staying on Remove the comma
apply
island
remained at 0.75 Add an article
the island
million
from 2010 to 2011.Furthermore
, travellers on cruise
ships
examined a fluctuation between 2011 and 2013, whereas
a sharp growth was occurred
on Change to the active voice
occurred
has occurred
island
dwellers with approximately 0.75m and also
remained constant increase to 2015.
To add on, total
started at a higher level above others at 1 Correct article usage
the total
million
and also
hitting
the maximum number of all Wrong verb form
hit
vistors
which was at 3.5m in the whole period.Correct your spelling
visitors
Moreover
, total
amount of humans Add an article
the total
stayed
on running boats Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
were
almost two Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
, however
, the least were that one
who were living on Correct your spelling
those
island
.Add an article
the island
an island
Lastly
, vistors
Correct your spelling
visitors
lived
on Wrong verb form
living
cruise
ships
surpassed human beings on island
between 2015 and 2016 and the lowest point Add an article
the island
an island
is
shown in 2012 by Wrong verb form
was
cruise
ships tourist
.Fix the agreement mistake
ship tourists
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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