The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of
time
that adults spent on various activities in a country in 1958 and 2008. Overall
, it is apparent that the time
spent on working, relaxing, traveling
to work, and other leisure activities or playing sports has significantly increased, Change the spelling
travelling
while
the time
spent on sleeping and going out with friends or family has decreased.
In 1958, work occupied the largest proportion of time
, accounting for more than one-third of the total time
. However
, it increased further
in 2008, reaching almost half the total time
. The time
spent on
working, relaxing at home, and Change preposition
apply
traveling
constituted only a small fraction, but it increased to 13% and 8%, respectively. The Change the spelling
travelling
time
spent on other interests or playing sports observed a minor increase of 2%.
In contrast
, the time
spent on
sleeping constituted a significant proportion of 32%, but it markedly decreased to one-fourth. In comparison, the Change preposition
apply
time
spent with friends and family decreased considerably from almost 20% to under one-tenth.Submitted by channguyenhon6 on
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