This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011

This chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Walse between 1918 and 2011
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of families who resided in privately owned homes and rented residences in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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, it is apparent that the percentage of households living in leased properties declined gradually,
in contrast
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with home ownership, which witnessed an upward trend throughout the given period. The year 1971 marked the point at which the total number of property owners overtook the rented ones. In 1918, families in England widely preferred to lodge in rented housing with percentage points at just below 80. The figure
subsequently
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went down at a regular pace to reach the lowest point at around 30 per
cent
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in 2001
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and
finally
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went up a little to about 35 per
cent
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.
On the other hand
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, despite the owned property being less popular in 1981 with a huge disparity to rented property with only 20 percentage points, the figure increased consistently to culminate at approximately 70 per
cent
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in 2001 and dipped moderately to around 65 per
cent
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in 2011. The rate of owned accommodation was nearly four times as much as itself at the outset.
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