You attended a meeting last week but you are not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who hotel for you. In your letter, you should tell: (a) what the problems were (b) what you didn't like about the hotel (c) what do you want organizer to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain because l
am not happy about the hotel
you booked last
week.
Although
you booked five
Correct determiner usage
a
star
Correct your spelling
five-star
hotel
, but service
's hotel
is very bad. First,
l
have problem
when Add an article
a problem
l
want to check in. I want
non Wrong verb form
wanted
smoking
Correct word choice
non-smoking
room
, but he gave me smoking
Add an article
a smoking
room
. Last
, my room
does
not Verb problem
is
clean
by Wrong verb form
cleaned
cleaning
Correct article usage
the cleaning
service
. Therefore
, l
am very disappointted
with Correct your spelling
disappointed
this
service
's hotel
.
I do not like service
Correct article usage
the service
this
Change preposition
of this
hotel
. Service
's receptionist is not welcome, and he is
not smile when Verb problem
does
l
come. I also
do not like the cleaning service
because he do
not clean my Change the verb form
does
room
, so l
felt uncomfortable when l
want to rest in the night.
I do not want this
happen
again Fix the infinitive
to happen
with
me, so you must Change preposition
to
to
check again about the Change the verb form
apply
hotel
that you want to booked
. You do not need to Change the form of the verb
book
booked
a Change the verb
book
five star
Add a hyphen
five-star
hotel
because l
just want to feel comfortable when l
want to sleep.
I hope this
happens like this
is not come
again for me. Thank you
Yours faithfully,
Andrianto RaharjaVerb problem
happen
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a separate point or issue, and use cohesive devices to link ideas effectively within and across paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The letter's structure meets the requirements, with identifiable paragraphs for each problem. However, the transitions between points could be smoother, and sentences should be better linked to demonstrate clear logical progression of ideas.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter; the informal language used is not suitable for a formal complaint letter.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the prompt in equal measure and provide sufficient detail for each aspect. The causes for dissatisfaction, while mentioned, require further explanation and specificity.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures to express your points clearly and concisely. Avoid repetition of words and phrases.
task achievement
Use proper letter formatting, including appropriate salutations and closings, to reflect a formal tone. Consider rephrasing the closing sentence for politeness and clarity.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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