The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.
This
line graph above illustrates the major source of contaminated air
rates, in UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
consist
of transport, Change the form of the verb
consisting
industry
and households
between 1990 and 2005. Overall
, it can be seen that the amount of pollution from industry
and households
experienced a downward trend, while
the transport showed an upward trend.
In 1990, the industry
was the most in emission of air
pollutants with almost 6 million
tonnes
. The transport and households
were start
Change the verb form
started
in
the same level at 1 Change preposition
at
million
tonnes
. When count
together, the total Wrong verb form
counted
air
pollution were
around 7 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
tonnes
.
However
, after that
the total amount of Add a comma
that,
air
contaminants steadily decreased and slumped to 4 million
tonnes
in year
1999. Change the article
the year
This
is because the industry
gradually reduced the quantity of pollutants emission, from 6 declined to about 3 million
tonnes
, not only industry
the households
also
showed reduction
. Add an article
a reduction
Although
, the transport’
pollutants emission still rose, Change noun form
transport
contrast
to Change preposition
in contrast
other
, Fix the agreement mistake
others
but
next 6 years, the amount of pollution approximately stayed at 3 Change preposition
in but
million
tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, industry, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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