The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.
This
line graph above illustrates the major source of contaminated
air
rates, in
UK
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the UK
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,
consist
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consisting
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of transport,
industry
and
households
between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that the amount of pollution from
industry
and
households
experienced a downward trend,
while
the transport showed an upward trend. In 1990, the
industry
was the most in emission of
air
pollutants with almost 6
million
tonnes
. The transport and
households
were start
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started
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in
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at
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the same level at 1
million
tonnes
. When
count
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counted
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together, the total
air
pollution
were
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was
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around 7
million
tonnes
.
However
, after
that
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that,
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the total amount of
air
contaminants steadily decreased and slumped to 4
million
tonnes
in
year
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the year
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1999.
This
is because the
industry
gradually reduced the quantity of pollutants emission, from 6 declined to about 3
million
tonnes
, not only
industry
the
households
also
showed
reduction
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a reduction
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.
Although
, the
transport’
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transport
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pollutants emission still rose,
contrast
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in contrast
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to
other
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others
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,
but
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in but
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next 6 years, the amount of pollution approximately stayed at 3
million
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, industry, households, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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