The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate
tourist
facilities
development on an
island
. In general, in the
beginning
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beginning,
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the
island
only had natural properties, but after the construction, many
facilities
have been built to support the tourism activities.
To begin
with, at
first,
the
island
is only an empty
island
, with a beach and several coconut trees. Meanwhile, after the construction, the area is almost
fully-covered
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fully covered
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with
tourist
facilities
to offer better
accomodation
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accommodation
for the visitor. The pier has been built to provide accessibility and to facilitate
tourist
attraction.
Therefore
, it connects with the
receptionist
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reception
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area in the middle of
tourist
facilities
by a path. The restaurant has been built next to the restaurant and seashore. On the left and right of the public area is the cottage which the
tourist
can choose to stay.
In addition
, on the pier side, there is an attraction in which tourists can sail by
sailing-boat
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sailing boat
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,
while
on the beach side, they can reap the experience of swimming in the sea.
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