With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?
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the internet
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for their children. I completely agree with Capitalize word
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statement and Linking Words
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essay will discuss the reasons behind the aforesaid issue.
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the internet
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because of
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particular
for
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apply
circumstance
they are more conscious than minors. Add an article
the circumstance
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completly
know how they protect Correct your spelling
completely
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from dangerous situations. Correct your spelling
themselves
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, when a child Linking Words
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on Change the verb form
clicks
unknown
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you
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your
such
as ID Number, Bank details, address etc can fall into the Linking Words
hand
of dangerous people.
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, many kids are directed by social media so Linking Words
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should be put in place because nowadays there are many things which are coming Correct your spelling
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from
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thing
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things
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influenced by him. Correct your spelling
easily
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like flying and jumped from Fix the agreement mistake
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to try flying.
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everything that has been stated so far many youngsters are exposed to risky scenarios Linking Words
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because of
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access Correct your spelling
easy
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to
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the world
world wide web
and social media Correct your spelling
World Wide Web
platform
. Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
Therefore
elders should restrict Linking Words
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internet
. Add an article
the internet
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number of Correct your spelling
predictable
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on Correct your spelling
restriction
restrictions
children
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children's
with
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to
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internet
will increase in future.Correct article usage
the internet
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