The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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car
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ownership
in Use synonyms
Britain
between the years 1971 and 2007.
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Overall
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while
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one
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during
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there was
car
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ownership
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significant drop. Use synonyms
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grew
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over
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cars
slip
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slipped
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one
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car
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during
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one
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apply
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car
slightly fell and grew between years.
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cars
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ownership
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per cent
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rising
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