Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries as a positive trend, while other things that it is harmful to the nation and they may lose their identities. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples

Foreign trade is considered to have a positive impact on
nation
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. Masses pass an argument that it could be deleterious and may cost the goodwill of
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.
However
, I believe that it is the best way to establish good relationships with the neighbouring countries. In my essay ,I shall explain my
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view point
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with
supportive
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example There are numerous factors supporting exports and communication.First of
all
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it
act
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as
supporting
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system
at
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the
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times of crisis. To exemplify, during COVID-19 pandemic.
Due to
in
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adequate amount of vaccine doses, America helped India by sending medicine.
This
was all because of the bond created between
two
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provinces.
Secondly
, it will help to boost
county's
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economy.to demonstrate
the
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that
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exports and
import
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imports
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play a crucial role in depicting gross domestic product (GDP)annually and if the number of exports increases the number of
import
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,
then
it will bring in more foreign currency.
thus
, inflation rates will
also
lower
down
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.
Moreover
, international
trades
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trade
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extend
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the opportunity of employment to many people and provides the chance to learn about the global market.
For instance
, many countries
such
as Dubai and Singapore
invites
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several skilled workers to work for their nation and earn in foreign currency. By
following
this
practice, skilled workers will have multiple options in the home place itself.
To conclude
, trading and communicating on
worldwide
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level
,
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will enhance the chances to grow at
fast
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pace.In my opinion, it is the best source of staying in touch,
multi nationally
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and
establish
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one's existence.
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