The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided two maps describe the development of Nelson's
city
from 200 to now.
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It is clear that
the noticeable changes Linking Words
of
the Change preposition
in
city
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is
more Change the verb form
are
construtions
are built including living building, shopping Correct your spelling
constructions
construction
centre
and restaurant.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
central
of the map is the Replace the word
centre
city
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center
and there Change the spelling
centre
have
a new scheme for people Change the verb form
has
rent
Fix the infinitive
to rent
bicycle
. An old Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
market
is relocated from the west to the east side of the Use synonyms
city
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centre
and became a covered Use synonyms
market
, Use synonyms
along with
a new shop is opened Linking Words
on
the place of Change preposition
in
original
Add an article
the original
market
.
The original train station Use synonyms
located
Add a missing verb
was located
at
the right side and next to Change preposition
on
old
Correct article usage
the old
market
, Use synonyms
however
, it Linking Words
is
moved to the north between Wrong verb form
has been
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city
Add an article
the city
centre
and Use synonyms
university
Correct article usage
the university
as well
Linking Words
as
a train road Correct word choice
and
is
constructed to Wrong verb form
was
linked
with university and bike rental. Change the form of the verb
link
Furthermore
, a living building and a new shopping Linking Words
centre
are built next to the right and left of the college.
On the Use synonyms
otherhand
, a restaurant Correct your spelling
other hand
and
bars and clubs Correct word choice
apply
on
are Change preposition
apply
opened
close to the river. Replace the word
open
Linking Words
Moreover
the road above Add a comma
Moreover,
restaurant
and bars is redesigned as a Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
side walk
.Correct your spelling
sidewalk
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre, market with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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