At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is universally accepted that the world

population

is experiencing an

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trend, which can be noticed

clearer

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in

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developing

countries

. Considering

this

trend, a heated debate has occurred around the topic of whether the booming

population

, resulting in younger inhabitants, will be more advantageous or not. In my opinion, the benefits

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offered

by the rejuvenation of workers certainly are more considerable compared to the losses.

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essay will demonstrate

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perspective and give a conclusion. It is inevitable that

younger

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population

provides

countries

with more supportive human resources. Since youngsters account for the vast majority of the workforce, there will be no lack of employees or workers.

This

will result in a gradual growth of the national economy, and many

countries

would attract investment from abroad thanks to their prosperous human resources.

Moreover

, the young

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more flexible in

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, which means they are more open to

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up-to-date technologies and working methods that the older generation would question their effectiveness.

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, the country would be modernised faster and more

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thanks to the adaptation of

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the young

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generation.

However

, having

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number of young adults has its own flaws and the most significant one is the lack of professionals. Youngsters are vulnerable to mistakes and miscalculation, which mean they are not likely to be capable of highly specialised fields. The reality would be a hassle to them, but not to the experienced workers.

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leads to the urge

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external help, which is a shared problem between developing

countries

due to

their lack of experienced workforce. With

this

problem, it will take a long time for the

countries

to nurture their youngsters to be specialised and

expertised

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expertise

in certain fields, which means the nations would have to face the possibility of losing the golden time to develop and industrialise themselves. In summary, I strongly believe that the advantages of

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population

outweigh its drawbacks. I think in the future, the key problems

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eventually be solved

due to

the

aging

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of

workforce

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, but the benefits might still be present.