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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. »

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. »
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The assigned tabular representation elucidates the information about customers spent on various items in five distinct nations in the year 2002. It is evident from the table that the highest expenditure on food/drinks/tobacco was in
Turkey
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 which was 32.14%. Following the second highest expenditure in
Ireland
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 that was more than a quarter. The next country was Italy and Sweden which was almost nearly (about 16.36% and 15.77% respectively). The rest of Spain's customers spent money on food/drinks/tobacco it was 18.80%. Probing ahead, Remained two sectors clothing/footwear and leisure/education.
On the contrary
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, clothing/footwear in
Ireland
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, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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 were the same accounting for approximately 6.63%. ,
while
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 in Italy 9.00% of consumers spent on clothing/footwear.
Whereas
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 in leisure/education, consumers did not spend too much on these items but only in
Turkey
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 was an expenditure of 4.35% higher than other nations.
Overall
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, In
Ireland
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 and
Turkey
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 was huge spending on food/drinks/tobacco rather than Spain and
Ireland
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 did not too much spend on leisure/education.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey, ireland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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