The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
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The two pie charts give data about the online shopping purchases for retail sectors in New Zealand during a 10-year period starting in 2003
Overall
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, at the beginning of the period, selling of books was the least online shopping ,
while
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travel was significant . In comparison,
at the end
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of the period film and music became the largest online shopping and the lowest online market was clothes Online buying by travel comprised 36% in the first year and
this
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showed a slight increase of 7% to 29% in 2013.
Likewise
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, in 2003 books sold at 19% which rose gradually to 22% 10 years later. With regards to the remaining methods of online shopping, there was an approximate 8% fall in flogging from clothes to 16%.
On the other hand
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, film and music went up from 12% to 33% in 2013
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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