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– Take a look at the chart below and perform the task as outlined: This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

– Take a look at the chart below and perform the task as outlined: This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provided illustrates the percentage of four selected materials recycled in a country from 1982 to 2010. Generally, paper and cardboard had the highest proportion throughout the
period
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,
while
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 plastics took the reverse. To commence with, paper and cardboard were the most recyclable materials all over the
period
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. They got the highest percentage from the beginning (65%) in 1982 to the end (70%) in 2010.
However
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, plastics began to be recycled in 1990 and they took the lowest proportion consistently with under 10%
since
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from
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 1990 until 2010.
Moreover
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, glass containers were in the second place of recyclable materials between 1982 and 2010. They had 50% in
initial
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the initial
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 and
got
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reached
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 the peak
with
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of
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 60%
at the end
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 of the
period
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.
Additionally
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, the recycling rate of aluminium cans sharply increased throughout the
period
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. They served the lowest start at 5% in 1986 and finished at their
peaks
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peak
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 at 45% in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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