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The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries

The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods, rice, wheat and maize, by people in four different countries
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The given table provides information on the daily
consumption
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 of three basic foods by the citizens of
four
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 different countries.
Overall
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, one noticeable feature is Egypt consumes
highest
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the highest
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 amount of
calories
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 per
day
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 out of all
four
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 countries.
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, Poland does not
consumes
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 any
maize
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. At over 2000
calories
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 per
day
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, Egyptians have the highest
intake
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 of
calories
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 among all
four
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 nations,
along with
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along with
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 the highest
consumption
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 of 
wheat
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 (1095
calories
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/
day
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). Their
consumption
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 of both
rice
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501
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is 501
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calories
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 and
maize
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578
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is 578
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calorie
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calories
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 around
the
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half of their
intake
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 of
wheat
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.
In
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addition
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addition,
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 the largest
consumption
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 of
rice
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 is by
Cambodian
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Cambodians
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 at 1445
calories
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 per
day
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,
while
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 their
intake
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 of
calories
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 from
wheat
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 and
maize
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 were (18) and (103) respectively.
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,
Mexican
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Mexicans
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 get more of their
calories
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 from
Maize
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 (1083
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calorie
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calories
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/
day
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), and the
consumption
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 of
rice
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 and
wheat
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 accounted for 332
calories
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 daily. The most interesting feature is that Poland
consume
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consumes
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 the lowest amount of
calories
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 among all the
four
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 countries. The daily
intake
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 of (19
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calorie
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calories
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/
day
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) and (865
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calorie
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calories
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/
day
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) from
rice
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 and
wheat
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 respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, four, calories, day, maize, intake, wheat, rice, calorie with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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