The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The illustration demonstrates how
plants
produce energy from sunlight.
Photosynthesis is a cyclical process that allows plants
to create a type of sugar as their food. There are 5 main stages to this
process and it is also
a naturally occurring phenomenon.
To begin
with, the sun sends light energy to plants
which is then
absorbed along with
carbon dioxide (through the leaf's stomata). At the same time, water is sucked up in the plant’s roots from the soil below and carried up through the stems. After that, the water then
combines with light energy and carbon dioxide to produce sugar. It is also
worth noting that the chlorophyll found in plants
absorb
green Correct subject-verb agreement
absorbs
wave lengths
, which in turn makes the Correct your spelling
wavelengths
plants
look green.
Next,
oxygen and vapor
are released from the leaves, again through the stomata. Change the spelling
vapour
This
process of lost
water from the Wrong verb form
losing
plants
is called transpiration. Finally
, any excess sugar is stored as starch in the roots of the plant which is used as the primary source of food.Submitted by jessica852258 on
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