The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The illustration demonstrates how
plants
produce energy from sunlight. Photosynthesis is a cyclical process that allows
plants
to create a type of sugar as their food. There are 5 main stages to
this
process and it is
also
a naturally occurring phenomenon.
To begin
with, the sun sends light energy to
plants
which is
then
absorbed
along with
carbon dioxide (through the leaf's stomata). At the same time, water is sucked up in the plant’s roots from the soil below and carried up through the stems. After that, the water
then
combines with light energy and carbon dioxide to produce sugar. It is
also
worth noting that the chlorophyll found in
plants
absorb
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green
wave lengths
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wavelengths
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, which in turn makes the
plants
look green.
Next,
oxygen and
vapor
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are released from the leaves, again through the stomata.
This
process of
lost
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water from the
plants
is called transpiration.
Finally
, any excess sugar is stored as starch in the roots of the plant which is used as the primary source of food.
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