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the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in additon to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate how much percentage of British
students
 of one university had
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the abiltiy
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abiltiy
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ability
 to speak other
languages
 apart from English in England in the
year
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years
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 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the proportion of
students
 who spoke additional
languages
 went up by 2010, with Spanish being
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the most
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most
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the most
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 commonly spoken in both
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apply
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the
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apply
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years
. The
students
 who spoke Spanish apart from English accounted for the major portions in the
year
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years
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 2000 and 2010, at 30% and 35% respectively. The
British
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number of British
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students
 who spoke additional
languages
 increased from 15% to 20 % in 10
years
.
Similarly
, the portion of
students
 who spoke two other
languages
 increased to 5% in 2010. The percentage of
students
 who only knew English in 2000 was 20 which declined by half in
next
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the next
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 10
years
.
Additionally
, the
graduates
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number of graduates
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 who
also
 spoke French decreased from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010.
However
,
portion
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the proportion
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 of
German speaking
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German-speaking
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students
 in
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the university
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university
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University
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 of England remained unchanged in
given
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the given
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 10
years
.
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