the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart provides information on the
percentage
of
men
and
women
who work out regularly from six different
age
groups in Australia in the year 2010.
Overall
, there was a significant proportion of
men
and
women
training regularly, but the proportion of Australian
women
trainers was higher than
men
in the given period. Almost 50% of
women
aged between 25 to 34
years
performed physical exercise daily. Surprisingly,
this
percentage
was similar in the youngest
age
(15 to 24
years
) at 47.7 and the oldest
age
(65 and over) at 47.1. But the highest
percentage
of more than 52 were the female trainers who exercised regularly between the ages of 35 to 65. In comparison, the highest
percentage
of 52.8 of
men
in the
age
group 15 to 24 reported to work out daily. The second highest was
men
aged 65 and over
years
at 46.7%. The daily physical activity ranged from 42% to almost 45% amongst
men
who were 25 to 34 and 45 to 64
years
in
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age
.
However
, the lowest
percentage
was recorded at 39.5 in male trainers
of
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age
35 to 44.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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