the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar chart provides information on the
percentage
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of
men
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and
women
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who work out regularly from six different
age
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groups in Australia in the year 2010.
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, there was a significant proportion of
men
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and
women
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training regularly, but the proportion of Australian
women
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trainers was higher than
men
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in the given period. Almost 50% of
women
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aged between 25 to 34
years
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performed physical exercise daily. Surprisingly,
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percentage
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was similar in the youngest
age
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(15 to 24
years
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) at 47.7 and the oldest
age
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(65 and over) at 47.1. But the highest
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of more than 52 were the female trainers who exercised regularly between the ages of 35 to 65. In comparison, the highest
percentage
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of 52.8 of
men
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in the
age
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group 15 to 24 reported to work out daily. The second highest was
men
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aged 65 and over
years
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at 46.7%. The daily physical activity ranged from 42% to almost 45% amongst
men
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who were 25 to 34 and 45 to 64
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in
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.
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, the lowest
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was recorded at 39.5 in male trainers
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35 to 44.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, men, women, age, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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