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Writing Samples
Band 6

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: * Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight * Explain how missing your flight impacted you * Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your airline because I experienced a lack of management. I reached at airport on time, though the checking windows were not open. It happened because your representatives were late.
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, everybody had to go through a long queue.
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, passengers were jumping the line and none of your officers wanted to pay attention to it. These terrible consequences
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 me towards trouble, and I could not catch the flight I booked. I took another flight but it landed at my desired destination around 3 hours late, and I was not able to attend the conference I went there for. I missed the golden opportunity of my life because of the lack of management of your company. I am looking forward
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strict action towards your Staff, and they should be punished and instructed appropriately that they have to tell people when they disobey the rules, or else I have to complain to the higher - authority about
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. I await your prompt Service, Yours Faithfully, Dhruvi Patel

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Grammar & Language Proficiency
Carefully proofread your letter to correct minor grammatical errors and improve clarity.
Organization
Use more structured paragraphs to separate different ideas for better readability.
Tone & Style
Consider a more formal tone in requests and complaints to maintain professionalism.
Task Achievement
Your letter clearly outlines the sequence of events and how it impacted you, effectively addressing the task given.
Tone
The closing of your letter is politely formulated, which is appropriate for the context.
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