Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Who is this person Why did you choose him? What is the characteristic of a good employee?
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is
simran
and I am working as Change the capitalization
Simran
early
childhood educator in your company. I am writing Correct article usage
an early
this
letter in regards
to Fix the agreement mistake
regard
nomination
of the best employee of the year as me and my colleagues want to nominate George for Add an article
the nomination
this
award.
Firstly
, by keeping his overall
year's performance in mind, He truly deserves to get this
award as well as
he had work
really hard and all the parents are praised about him. Wrong verb form
worked
Further more
, He is Correct your spelling
Furthermore
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the first
first
male early childhood educator Correct article usage
the first
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of
in
our Change preposition
of
day care
and he is Correct your spelling
daycare
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an inspiration
inspiration
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an inspiration
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for
of
many male Change preposition
for
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educators
educator
.Fix the agreement mistake
educators
Moreover
, his potential to handle work pressure and always come up with accurate resolution
is remarkable. Fix the agreement mistake
resolutions
Therefore
, my team think he is the right person for this
appreciation.
I know that there are many characteristics of employees to become successful
employee. Add an article
a successful
For instance
good communication skills, good listening, handling working in
pressure Change preposition
under
and
doing it efficiently and effectively and working as a team member by using rightful skills and understanding. I have seen all Correct word choice
apply
this
traits in George and I personally nominate him for Change the determiner
these
this
award and
if you need any information you can contact me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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apply
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
SimranCorrect your spelling
Yours
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