The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts exhibit data about the consumption of power in each house in Australia and how the same causes
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emissions
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, the
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emissions
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are higher than the
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consumption for all house items except for heating which is showing a reverse trend. A significant proportion of the
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is consumed by heating which is 42% of the total household
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, followed by water heating
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makes up 30% of the
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consumption. There is a difference of only 8% between the use of power for other appliances (15%) and refrigeration (7%). Lighting and cooling make up a negligible percentage of total
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use, ranging between only 2% and 4%. In the second pie chart,
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the highest
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are from water heating, accounting for a little less than a third of the total
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, roughly similar to
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from other appliances (28%). Heating, surprisingly, emits only 15% of the total
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even though it is the biggest consumer of
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energy
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. Where refrigeration causes 14% of
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gas
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, the proportion of
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from lighting and cooling together produce 11% of the total
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gas
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, gas, emissions, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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