The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts exhibit data about the consumption of power in each house in Australia and how the same causes
greenhouse
gas
emissions
.
Overall
, the
greenhouse
gas
emissions
are higher than the
energy
consumption for all house items except for heating which is showing a reverse trend. A significant proportion of the
energy
is consumed by heating which is 42% of the total household
energy
, followed by water heating
that
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makes up 30% of the
energy
consumption. There is a difference of only 8% between the use of power for other appliances (15%) and refrigeration (7%). Lighting and cooling make up a negligible percentage of total
energy
use, ranging between only 2% and 4%. In the second pie chart,
it is clear that
the highest
emissions
are from water heating, accounting for a little less than a third of the total
greenhouse
gas
emissions
, roughly similar to
emissions
from other appliances (28%). Heating, surprisingly, emits only 15% of the total
emissions
even though it is the biggest consumer of
the
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energy
. Where refrigeration causes 14% of
greenhouse
gas
, the proportion of
emissions
from lighting and cooling together produce 11% of the total
greenhouse
gas
.
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