The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The line graph illustrates the global
demand
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of
different types of Change preposition
for
textile
from 1980 to 2015.
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textiles
it is clear that
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cutton
have the highest Correct your spelling
cotton
number of
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apply
demand
, Use synonyms
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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wool
have Use synonyms
the
small number.
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a
demand
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of
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for
fiber
in the market. It started at 5 Change the spelling
fibre
million
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ton
in 1980. Afterwards, it experienced a significant rise in 1998 and it had 33 Fix the agreement mistake
tons
million
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ton
. Fix the agreement mistake
tons
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, it had a small drop Linking Words
by
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of
million
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ton
in 2000. Over the next 15 years, it rapidly rose by 37 Fix the agreement mistake
tons
million
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ton
. it reached a peak Fix the agreement mistake
tons
at
69 Change preposition
of
million
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ton
in 2015.
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tons
demand
is Use synonyms
cutton
. It began with the highest rate about 7 Use synonyms
million
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ton
in 1980. Fix the agreement mistake
tons
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, it Linking Words
gradualy
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gradually
increase
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increases
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ton
in 1993. Afterwards, it Fix the agreement mistake
tons
reamined
steady at 20 till 1995. The rate was Correct your spelling
remained
same
as the Correct article usage
the same
pollyester
in 1995. Over the next 20 years, it experienced a Correct your spelling
polyester
flactuation
and reached a peak at 32 Correct your spelling
fluctuation
million
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ton
in 2015.
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tons
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fiber
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fibre
demand
are Use synonyms
cellulosic
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cutton
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cotton
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cutton
had 3 and 2 Correct your spelling
cotton
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million
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ton
of Fix the agreement mistake
tons
demand
in 1980. Over the next 18 years, when Use synonyms
wool
slightly increased by 2 Use synonyms
million
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ton
, Fix the agreement mistake
tons
cellulosic
experienced a drop, by 2 Use synonyms
million
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ton
in 1998. Fix the agreement mistake
tons
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wool
experienced a small drop and Use synonyms
cellulosic
had a Use synonyms
steadly
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steadily
steady
increse
, from 1990 to 2015. Correct your spelling
increase
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the end, Change the preposition
In
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stayed at 4 Use synonyms
million
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