The bar chart illustrated the amount of houses constructed yearly in two cities ( Derby and Nottingham) during the period from 2000 to 2009.
The bar chart compares the
number
of housing
built in two areas which are Fix the agreement mistake
houses
Derby
and Nottingham
during 10 years from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, the accumulation of houses in Derby
was superior to that in Nottingham
in the given time since the number
of that in Derby
soared in 2008 ,whilst that in Nottingham
sharply decreased in the same year.
According to
the information shown in the diagram, the figure for constructed dwellings in Derby
reached a plateau from 2003 to 2007 with the number
of 110. After a year, the amount
of new houses skyrocketed to 280. Change the quantifier
number
On the other hand
, the number
of new housing shot up from 10 to 190 between 2006 and 2007 in Nottingham
. However
, it dived from 190 to 15 one year later and surged to 250 in 2009.
To sum up
, comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
Derby
, the need of
new construction in Change preposition
for
Nottingham
changed dramatically in the given decade.Submitted by s99104032 on
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