he table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows data about
percentage
of individuals Add an article
the percentage
use
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who use
smart phones
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smartphones
according to
their various features from 2006 to 2010.
First
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First,
af
all, we can see increasing Correct your spelling
of
patten
using Correct your spelling
pattern
of
every tool Change preposition
apply
exept
playing games and making calls which each Correct your spelling
except
droped
non-significant just 1 Correct your spelling
dropped
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, the table shows the least statistical increase of people use
their phones for recording videos than other features, Wrong verb form
using
while
taking photo
has become a popular activity. Fix the agreement mistake
photos
Between
mentioned activities, playing games has the most influence on Change preposition
Among
community
from 12 to 41 Add an article
the community
percentage
during the years. Less grow up belongs to playing music which just had 14 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
.
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per cent
To sum up
, regardless the
rate, Change preposition
of the
using
of all Wrong verb form
the use
features
that are mentioned in Correct article usage
the features
table
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the table
have been growed
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has grown
during
2006 to 2010.Change preposition
from
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