the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

the bar chart below shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart gives information about the
percentage
of Australian
males
and
females
doing physical activity regularly categorized by
age
in 2010. The first impression from the graph is that 25-year-old women and older do more exercise than men of the same
age
. As can be seen, in all
age
groups
females
are more active than
males
except 15 to 24 group which the
percentage
of men is about 5
percent
higher than women. There is a downtrend in the rate of
males
until the
age
of 44 from about 52 to almost 39, after that an upward trend of almost 10
percent
can be seen.
Whereas
, the
percentage
of
females
who do physical practice grows by approximately 5 % since 64 years old and
then
it experiences a drop (drops) to almost 47%.
It is clear that
the most practical
males
are between 15 and 24 which is 13
percent
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more than the least practical ones who are in the
age
group 35 to 44.
On the other hand
, women between 45 and 54 years old are more active than the other
age
groups by around 53
percent
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. The
percentage
of Australian men over 65 doing physical activities regularly is almost the same as Australian
females
by nearly 47 %.
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  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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