Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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majority of people

thinking

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the only matters to the environment nowadays is

only

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the extinction of certain flora and fauna,

while

the

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others

ponder over the other more critical to

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human

being

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beings

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such

as climate change and natural

disaster

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. To

me

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both points of view are equally worth considering and finding solutions for because we as humans do not only own the globe alone but

also

cohabit with the other species. With people thinking the most obvious environmental issues we are coping with at present are plant and animal disappearance, they must be concerning the

others

' lives as more central.

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is because the

others

are

proved

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to have severe impacts on the globe and

also

work as preservers of

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nature.

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, there

have

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been a lot of

researches

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carried out to prove that the more species disappearing the faster and more negatively our environment is changing.

Consequently

, we are not living in the world richly given by the mother nature.

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, aside from animals and plants, we humans are

also

being affected negatively

from

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the

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environmental matters

that

is

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at the same level of

worrying

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.  Loss

to

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trees contributes to the global higher temperature, from which humans are suffering from

toughest

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summers than ever with long-lasting droughts or massive floods in some areas.

Additionally

, more and more animals at the edge of

disapearing

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disappearing

also

causes

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the link to a great change

to

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the

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human habitats.

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, it is unfair to say the only concerns

caused

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by the changing environment since we are

also

facing the same influential impacts. To

summary

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,

along with

plants and animals, we

human

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humans

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are

also

citizens of the earth, so any environmental factors being harmful to them cannot be avoidable to us.

Therefore

, it is righter

to

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me to think that not only these or the

others

are more crucial but all affected parties by the negatively transforming ecosystem.