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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart
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 the annual quantity of
rentals
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 and three kinds of
sales
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 of films in a store from 2002 to 2011.
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,
while
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 the
number
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 of both
rentals
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 and VHS
sales
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 experienced a decrease, the opposite trend was true for DVD
sales
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 and Blu-ray
sales
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 over the period. The annual
number
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 of
rentals
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 accounted for the biggest category in 2002, at approximately 190,000, which doubled VHS
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sales'
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sales
number
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 and was four times higher than
DVDsales'
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sales
number
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 in the same period. The figure for
dvd
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DVD
sales
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 saw a steep rise and overtook that for
rentals
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 in 2 years later at 170,000. In 2006,
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number
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 reached a peak at 200,000 and ranked first wheares
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for
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rentals
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 decreased significantly by 100,000 and that for VHS
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 dropped dramatically and disappeared in
this
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 year. From 2007, the annual quantity of Blu-ray
sale
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sales
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 appeared at a small
number
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 and climbed slightly to 15,000 in 20011.
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,
dvd
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DVD
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sale'
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sales
number
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 witnessed an insignificant decline to 180,000 and still remained
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 top position in 2011, followed by the figure for
rentals
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, which fell by half in the
last
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 four years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rentals, sales, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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