The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart
illustrate
the annual quantity of Change the verb form
illustrates
rentals
and three kinds of sales
of films in a store from 2002 to 2011. Overall
, while
the number
of both rentals
and VHS sales
experienced a decrease, the opposite trend was true for DVD sales
and Blu-ray sales
over the period.
The annual number
of rentals
accounted for the biggest category in 2002, at approximately 190,000, which doubled VHS sales'
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sales
number
and was four times higher than DVDsales'
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sales
number
in the same period. The figure for dvd
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DVD
sales
saw a steep rise and overtook that for rentals
in 2 years later at 170,000. In 2006, this
number
reached a peak at 200,000 and ranked first wheares that
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whereas
for
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apply
rentals
decreased significantly by 100,000 and that for VHS also
dropped dramatically and disappeared in this
year.
From 2007, the annual quantity of Blu-ray sale
appeared at a small Fix the agreement mistake
sales
number
and climbed slightly to 15,000 in 20011. Similarly
, dvd
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DVD
sale'
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sales
number
witnessed an insignificant decline to 180,000 and still remained the
top position in 2011, followed by the figure for Change preposition
in the
rentals
, which fell by half in the last
four years.Submitted by nttung.182 on
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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