The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two outlines compare a
road
's accessability
to a Correct your spelling
accessibility
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it is obvious that the city
road
had
been through significant variations Wrong verb form
has
during
three years. Change preposition
over
Additionally
, there are some new amenities for public's
Correct article usage
the public's
convenient
.
Replace the word
convenience
First,
with regard to the main hospital road
, there are two roundabouts constructed in 2010. One between
the Add a missing verb
is between
city
road
and the hospital road
and the other is located between the ring road
and the hospital road
, which
both of them reach the bus station. Correct word choice
where
Then
, there is a new section constructed for individuals
car parks located Change the noun form
individual
in
the eastern side of the Change preposition
on
city
hospital, which connects to the ring road
.
Furthermore
, in 2007, there were six bus stops in
the main hospital Change preposition
on
road
that has been
substituted for Wrong verb form
were
new
bus station ward Correct article usage
a new
in
the west side of the Change preposition
on
road
. Finally
, the staff and the public car parks are
Wrong verb form
were
seperated
into two different Correct your spelling
separated
parkings
in 2010 and the former parking allocates to staff and caretakers only.Correct your spelling
parking
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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