The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the
amount
of
individual
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individuals
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per
folks
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folk
show examples
in the UK in two different years (1981 and 2001).
Overall
, when we compare the
number
of people per household in 1981 and 2001 we can
seen
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see
show examples
that
,
Remove the comma
apply
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the person who
living
Wrong verb form
live
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alone
had
Wrong verb form
has
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risen and all householder
amount
except
2-person
Correct article usage
the 2-person
show examples
group
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
decreased in 2001
according to
1981.
To begin
with, the
number
of 6-person families has decreased,
this
amount
was 6 in 1981
whereas
it was 2 in 2001. The 5-person meinie was 8 in given first year
although
it was 15 in 2001. The 4-person families
shown
Wrong verb form
showed
show examples
the same
amount
risen.
Furthermore
, couple of person
number
's had increased during the 20 years. The
alone
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
people showing the largest increment were the living. In 1981, alone
male
Correct article usage
the male
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or female
number
was 17
while
this quantities
Change the determiner
this quantity
these quantities
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had been
Wrong verb form
was
show examples
26 in 2001.
To sum up
, individuals preferred to live alone or live with fewer people in the
last
given year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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