The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the
amount
of individual
per Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
folks
in the UK in two different years (1981 and 2001).
Fix the agreement mistake
folk
Overall
, when we compare the number
of people per household in 1981 and 2001 we can seen
thatChange the verb form
see
,
the person who Remove the comma
apply
living
alone Wrong verb form
live
had
risen and all householder Wrong verb form
has
amount
except 2-person
group Correct article usage
the 2-person
had
decreased in 2001 Unnecessary verb
apply
according to
1981.
To begin
with, the number
of 6-person families has decreased, this
amount
was 6 in 1981 whereas
it was 2 in 2001. The 5-person meinie was 8 in given first year although
it was 15 in 2001. The 4-person families shown
the same Wrong verb form
showed
amount
risen. Furthermore
, couple of person number
's had increased during the 20 years.
The alone
people showing the largest increment were the living. In 1981, alone Correct word choice
apply
male
or female Correct article usage
the male
number
was 17 while
this quantities
Change the determiner
this quantity
these quantities
had been
26 in 2001.
Wrong verb form
was
To sum up
, individuals preferred to live alone or live with fewer people in the last
given year.Submitted by dytayseozgul on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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