The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram indicates the
population
of native residents
as well as
immigrants in Australia who lived in various regions, including cities; towns
; and rural areas
in 1995 and 2010 respectively.
overall
, the total population
density in cities indicated an upward trend, in which people from overseas accounted for the largest proportion, compared to rural areas
, which lost a large number
of residents
during the surveyed period. On top of that, the number
of residents
in towns
encountered a decline as well.
The population
in cities in Australia consisted of 50% of native individuals and 60% of people who were born in other nations in 1995, the former went up to 65% and the latter surged to 80% within 5 years in 2010.
On the other hand
, the data of towns
and rural areas
displayed an opposite trend, losing a great number
of residents
based on the statistic
. Rural Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
areas
were favoured by foreigners, accounting for 40% compared to 30% of local residents
in 1995, however
, the data underwent a drastic drop to less than 10%. The number
of individuals who live in towns
experienced a relatively low decrease, the population
consisted of 15% of native residents
and 10% of foreigners in 2010 from 20%. and 15% in 1995.Submitted by unapoya0916 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, residents, towns, areas, number with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!