Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others, however, believe that everyone should have the freedom to choose whatever sports activities they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports
are an imperative activity of
Change preposition
in
people
lives.Change noun form
people's
when
it comes Capitalize word
When
some
claim that there Change preposition
to some
are
some dangerous Change the verb form
is
game
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games
should
be banned by the authority, Correct pronoun usage
that should
while
others opine that games should be chosen with
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apply
freedomly
whatever Correct your spelling
freedom
freedoms
sports
people
like. In this
essay, both sides of the topic will be discussed followed by my opinion.
On the one hand, supporters of some kind of adverse sports
can cause casualty
, depth Add an article
a casualty
wound
, Fix the agreement mistake
wounds
sometimes
dead Correct word choice
and sometimes
also
happens by
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in
the
dangerous games like Correct article usage
apply
wresting
. Correct your spelling
wrestling
This
is because of
Correct word choice
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
authority
should Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
be banned
Wrong verb form
ban
the
dangerous Correct article usage
apply
sports
in order to people
cannot get serious wounds and casualty
and they Fix the agreement mistake
casualties
can
lead a good life. Verb problem
apply
For example
, Add an article
the wresting
wresting
Correct your spelling
wrestling
game
can cause dead and Fix the agreement mistake
games
any
body parts broken, even though, still mankind Correct quantifier usage
apply
plays
Correct subject-verb agreement
play
this
game
without knowing the repercussions, therefore
, the government should take a
action to Remove the article
apply
banned
Change the form of the verb
ban
this
type of dangerous sports
for the public Fix the agreement mistake
sport
sakes
.
Fix the agreement mistake
sake
On the other hand
, opponents of everyone should have a right to choose their favourite game
whether dangerous or safe it fully depends on their choice and preference. This
is because of
the government does not interfere in Change preposition
apply
this
matter, it is fully their freedom whatever sports
activity people
like and they do. For instance
, when a person plays any sports
with full interestingly he will become a master Fix the agreement mistake
sport
on
a particular Change preposition
in
game
while
his entire lifestyle might be changed drastically as compared to the past. Sports
activities can do for their own interst
and freedom which the public can perform effectively without any restrictions. These are the main reasons Correct your spelling
interest
interests
for
I agree that everyone should have the freedom to select any Change preposition
apply
sport
activities whatever they like whether hard or simple.
Change the noun form
sports
To conclude
, although
the dangerous game
can bring casualty
, depth Fix the agreement mistake
casualties
wound
, Fix the agreement mistake
wounds
any
parts of the body broken and dead, so, the government should be banned, Correct word choice
and any
sports
should be chosen with
Change preposition
apply
freedomly
Correct your spelling
freedom
while
the
individuals can perform effectively without any restrictions. In my opinion, the Correct article usage
apply
benefit
side of Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
people
should should be chosen
any Wrong verb form
choosing
game
activities with freedomly
poses always outweigh the limitations.Correct your spelling
freedom
freedoms
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