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The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented graph detailed the data about the comparison of
sales
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 among five categories of
books
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 between 2006 and 2010 (young adult, classic, mystery,
romance
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, sci-fi and
fantasy
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) . Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that there were fluctuating trends for all earning brackets (young adults, classic, mystery,
romance
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, sci-fi and
fantasy
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). The most popular
book
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 that has sold was
romance
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 and mystery
book
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,
while
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 the science fiction and
fantasy
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book
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 was the lowest in
sales
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. Looking at the details, it is evident that the profit of young adult
sales
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 was approximately 30.000 cabbage in the two beginning of the
years
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 (2006 and 2007).
Then
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 the number of gross
earnings
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 declined to just below 20.000
dollars
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 before it rose in the following
years
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 (less than 30.000
dollars
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). The classic
books
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 started at nearly 20.000
dollars
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 and they increased and fluctuated in the middle of the
years
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 until the income of
these category
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this category
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 was the lowest at just below 10.000
dollars
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. A similar pattern of marketing results was shown in sci-fi and
fantasy
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books
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book
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 which wavered steadily over the
years
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.
In contrast
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,
romance
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books
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 stand first as the most
sales
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 of profit. In 2006, the total
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earnings
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 reached just over 80.000
dollars
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 and climbed dramatically until it counted almost 120.000
dollars
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 in
sales
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.
Although
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 the
earnings
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 plunged to just beyond 60.000
dollars
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, they still grew steadily in the next
years
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 of turnover. An identical trend was obtained for the remaining category which was sold with a high number of
earnings
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.
However
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, it can not pass the achievement of
romance
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book
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 income revenue.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, romance, fantasy, book, years, earnings, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales trend
  • comparison
  • sales figures
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • spike in sales
  • drop in sales
  • contributing factors
  • popularity
  • societal trends
  • cultural trends
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