Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

There are arguments in public that the significant

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to overcome pollution and traffic

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increase

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the price of

the

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fuel

. Personally, I do think

this

is a good attempt but

this

leads to another

problem

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as

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stocking

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food

suplies

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supplies

for

farmers

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therefore

another

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method

should be tried ; government can improve public

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and

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the number of selling

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in their county.

Initially

, pollution and

congesion

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congestion

happen in big cities and many people are

consern

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concerned

concern

about

this

and one of the

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is

raise

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fuel

prices, but

this

way does not significantly solve the

problem

and

trigers

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triggers

another

problem

for

farmers

.

This

phenomenon happens when

farmers

need

fuel

for plant cultivation

altough

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although

the price cannot be reached and

this

leads them

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be

able

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to farm totally.

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food

supllay

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supply

can be indirectly affected because there

are

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not enough

food

that they dropped

to

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the city for public

consuming

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.

For instance

, in some

cities

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farmers

play

main

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role

to

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vegetable

suplies

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supplies

, but when the price

fuel

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go

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up

then

the

farmers

should

limited

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their cost to cultivate and it causes limiting the

food

siplies

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supplies

,

as a result

government should export from other countries. In terms of measures, I personally think that improving public amenities is a good attempt to overcome these issues. Public service can fit many people and when it is

maintenanced

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maintained

well,

then

the users can feel

convinient

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convenient

and prefer to use it.

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will affect to decrease

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number of

owning

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vehicles.

Government

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has

authority

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to border selling cars or motorcycles by issuing

law

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To sum up

, raising

fuel

cost

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can trigger another

problem

for

farmers

and

another ways

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to tackle

this problems

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is

maintaining

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by maintaining

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public

transportations

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transportation

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and improving

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the law

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law

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laws

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for vehicles.