The Diagrams Below Show Changes In Felixstone In The UK Between 1967 And 2001.

The Diagrams Below Show Changes In Felixstone In The UK Between 1967 And 2001.
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The
two
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figures illustrate the changes that happen in
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
in the UK with respect to
two
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different years, 1967 and 2001.
Overall
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, there are several main features that
exist
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existed
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in 2001 that
are
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were
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not available around 4 decades ago,
such
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as Apartments, Public and Private beaches, Car
park
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parks
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, Wind turbines, Swimming
pool
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pools
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, and Tennis courts.
On the other hand
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, there were
also
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some facilities being built in 1967, but those are being eliminated 41 years later which include Fish Market, Marina, Pier, and Farmland. Another noticeable feature from the diagrams is that the shops were once accessible by visitors on
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sides of the High
street
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in 1967, both on the east and west of that road.
This
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is not the case anymore in 2001 since the shops are only available on the west side of the High street. Another interesting fact that can be described from the data
are
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as follows.
For the
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The
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farmland itself
, it is
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has been
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replaced by several new facilities,
such
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as
Swimming
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a Swimming
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Pool,
two
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Tennis courts, and
additional
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an additional
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hotel.
Furthermore
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, the Marina and Pier that once could be seen
the
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by the
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local residents are substituted with the beaches which are Private and Public.
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