The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the numerical information about the amount of tourists visiting a
caribbean
island during a particular period from 2010 to 2017.
in general, the figure Change the capitalization
Caribbean
of
tourists Change preposition
for
consistantly
increased during the given period of seven years. And, the Correct your spelling
consistently
datas
of two kinds of visiting styles to travellers Correct your spelling
data
grown
in 2017 compared with the first year.
it is obvious that there were an increasing number of people who went to Wrong verb form
grew
caribbean
island over 7 years, and the data ascended from 1 Change the capitalization
Caribbean
millions
Change to a singular noun
million
of
Change preposition
apply
visitors
in 2010 to 3.5 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
visitors
, and the speed of increase was extremly
rapid. more and more Correct your spelling
extremely
Visitors
were interested in staying on cruise ships, except in 2010, there was a slight drop for
quantities of tourists, the number of Change preposition
in
visitors
who had those visiting behaviors
Change the spelling
behaviours
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
a Change preposition
apply
raising
trend throughout Correct your spelling
rising
whole
period of time. As for Add an article
the whole
visitors
staying on island
, the data experienced a fluctuation Add an article
the island
which
starting with 0.75 Correct pronoun usage
apply
milions
of Correct your spelling
millions
million
visitors
in the course of two years, then
up to 1.5 millions
from 2012 to 2015 and Change to singular
million
have
a Unnecessary verb
apply
little
decline in 2016 with 1.25 Correct word choice
small
millions
, following Change to singular
million
rebound
to 1.5 Add an article
a rebound
millions
till Change to singular
million
end
of 2017.Add an article
the end
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