Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
#look #calorie #intake #states #period #time #summarise #information #features #comparisons #minutes
The bar chart provides
salery
in dollars Correct your spelling
salary
Change preposition
from whe
whe
an employee Correct your spelling
when
began
Wrong verb form
begins
untile
Correct your spelling
until
complete
three years. Wrong verb form
completes
However
, The given table depicts the total working hours a week for five profession
.
Change to a plural noun
professions
Overall
, except underground
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for underground
driver
the salary Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
increase
with the higher Fix the agreement mistake
increases
houre
Correct your spelling
hours
work
.Regarding, the underground driver and firefighter Change preposition
of work
are
gain Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
the higest
higest
salary throughout Correct your spelling
highest
period
. Add an article
the period
In contrast
, nurse
and police Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
are
Verb problem
have
a
similar Correct article usage
apply
value
.
As you Fix the agreement mistake
values
seen
, typically working hours of Add the auxiliary verb
have seen
saw
treatcher
and firefighter are 55 Correct article usage
the treatcher
h
, Correct your spelling
hours
while
the firefighter is gain
Wrong verb form
gains
higher
than Correct word choice
more
tratcher
by about 10.000 Correct article usage
the tratcher
dollar
. Change to a plural noun
dollars
Although
underground
Add an article
the underground
driver
Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
is working
fewer hours Wrong verb form
work
but
he gains the double of Remove the conjunction
apply
teatcher
Correct your spelling
teachers
is
nearly 50 dollars at Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
the begining
begining
Correct your spelling
beginning
job
with just above 50.000 Change preposition
of job
at
the next three years. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, nursing spent 38 h
. When starts work Correct your spelling
hours
they
salary is 15.000 and dramatically Correct pronoun usage
their
increase
just below 20.000. Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
Moreover
, pollice is working 40 h
weekly and Correct your spelling
hours
gain
Correct subject-verb agreement
gains
at
the same level of Change preposition
apply
salry
is approximately 20.000 dollars.Correct your spelling
salary
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