The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summa se the info ation selecting and repo ing the main features, and make compa ons e relevant.
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The graph compares the households owning and renting houses in two countries between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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it is clear that
the percentage of households owning a living place showed a gradual increase from 1918 to 2011, Linking Words
while
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rate
of families renting accommodation Correct article usage
the rate
deacresed
during 98 years.
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decreased
First,
in 1918, Linking Words
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the households
households
percentage in hiring houses reached its peak of 78%, Fix the agreement mistake
household
while
those who owned one were a mere 23% reported to be the lowest percentage in both countries. Linking Words
Furthermore
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gragh
shows that the Correct your spelling
graph
amount
of individuals who occupied temporarilyChange the quantifier
number
,
declined steadily until 2001 to roughly Remove the comma
apply
at
32%. Change preposition
apply
Then
, the figure rose Linking Words
up for
about 5% in the next 10 years and reached 37% in England and Wales.
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to
On the other hand
, figures for residents Linking Words
possesing
a living place increased significantly, Correct your spelling
possessing
that
almost 70% of the citizens Change preposition
with
owned
accommodations in 2001. Wrong verb form
owning
However
, the same statistic fell to about 6% in 2011. Surprisingly, both figures Linking Words
remaind
at Correct your spelling
remain
remained
a
same level of exactly 50% in 1971.Correct article usage
the
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