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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.
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The given pie chart illustrates the proportion of world
forest
 and wood supply in five different continents, which are, South
America
,
Africa
, Asia, Europe, and North
America
. The units are measured in
percent
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per cent
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 in both charts.
Overall
 it can be clearly seen that the first position for the biggest
forest
 world
located
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is located
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 in
Africa
,
following
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followed
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 by North
America
 in the second.
However
, North
America
 is the leader
for
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in
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the
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apply
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timber production,
whereas
Africa
 is the least. In terms of the share of world
forest
, the figure shows that
Africa
have
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 the biggest
forest
 at 27%. The second place is taken by North
America
 by 2% below
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apply
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the
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Africa
. Meanwhile
for
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Europe, South
America
, and Asia, are below 20% at 18%, 16% and 14%, respectively. Regarding the timber rate, almost a third is from North
America
 and bigger than the
forest
 proportion.
Another regions
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also
 experienced the same conditions, South
America
, Europe and Asia, have at 23%, 20% and 18%, severally.
Although
Africa
 is the largest
forest
, they only produce a third of wood at 9% and
being
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the smallest percentage.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, america, africa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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