A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday * describe some possible disadvantages * say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Mike,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I heardLinking Words
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you're going on Remove the comma
apply
a camping holidays
with Correct the article-noun agreement
a camping holiday
camping holidays
you
father Correct pronoun usage
your
this
summer. Man, Linking Words
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is a great idea! We went Linking Words
last
year with my family and it was cool.
You know, all Linking Words
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fresh air and huge trees around give you a feeling of Linking Words
a
real freedom. Remove the article
apply
In addition
, I met a lot of Linking Words
wild life
, there were a bunch of colourful butterflies there. You like them, if I'm not mistaken, so I'm sure you'll be satisfied.
I didn't make a proper analysis before the trip and it was a big mistake. I suffered from Correct your spelling
wildlife
the
Correct article usage
apply
mosquittos
the whole month, so don't forget to take some repellent with you. And... Correct your spelling
mosquitos
mosquitoes
Be
ready for a non-classic toilet and bathroom experience, Wrong verb form
Being
it
was the most difficult part Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
me.
Oh man, if I weren't Change preposition
for
send
to a summer camp in Malta Wrong verb form
sent
this
year, I would definitely go camping with your Linking Words
familiy
. It would be really great. Maybe we should organize something like that next year? What do you think?
Say hi to your mom and dad! I tremendously miss her delightful cherry pie.
Hope to see you soon buddy,
AdamCorrect your spelling
family
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structure
Ensure that your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Organize ideas into separate paragraphs, introducing each new point in its own paragraph.
tone
The greeting and closing conventions are adequate, but aim for a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter.
task response
Respond directly to each point in the task. Ensure that your reasons and beliefs are clear and that you address all parts of the prompt.
cohesion
Work on paragraphing by including one main idea per paragraph and using cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.