The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
These pie charts compare the average amount of
energy
is
used by Six categories of water heating, heating, refrigeration, cooling, lighting, and other appliances and the percentage of household Unnecessary verb
apply
greenhouse
gas
that is
produced in Australia.
At first glance can be understood that refrigeration, other appliances, and lighting use less energy
but each of them emissions twice time greenhouse
gas
more than the amount of energy
usage. Just heating tools use more energy
but manufacture less detrimental gas
.
According to
the flow chart, it can be seen that households which are utilized for heating purpose
are less harmful than others Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
due to
they give a lot of energy
(42%) but a little greenhouse
gas
releases
into the air(15%). water heating and cooling have approximately equal amounts of Replace the word
released
energy
consumption and harmful gas
production just less than a third and a negligible amount at 2% respectively.
The figures for energy
consumption by refrigeration, lighting, and other appliances are 7%, 15%, and 4% respectively which are manufacturing 14%, 8%, and 28% greenhouse
gas
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