The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram illustrates the
process
of making
cement
,
while
the second one demonstrates the
procedure
of producing concrete which is used for constructing buildings. It is clearly seen that the
cement
-making
process
has six stages and is a simple
process
.
On the other hand
, there is one step in concrete production which is not a complex
procedure
. Both processes require a range of equipment and machinery. The first step in the
cement
production
procedure
is that limestone and clay pieces should be turned to powder by a crusher.
This
powder
then
undergoes a mixing stage in a mixer. After that, mixed powder is heated through a heater which is rotating.
Next,
the output of the heater is subjected to a grinding step to make
cement
before the
last
stage where some bags are filled with produced
cement
. The
process
of the concrete-making
procedure
begins with pouring manufactured
cement
, water, sand, and gravel into a mixer with the proportions of 15 %, 10 %, 25%, and 50 %, respectively. By swinging the concrete mixer,
finally
, the concrete is produced.
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