You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Presented

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The presented

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diagram illustrates the data of producing carbonated soda process.

Overall

, carbonated drinks go through different stages before it comes to

supermarket

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the supermarket

a supermarket

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To begin

with, the first

stage

named

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called

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Water

cleaning" where raw

water

comes

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into

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filter

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a filter

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and goes to

water

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the water

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softener and takes chemicals.

Then

by using

pump

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the pump

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water

gets into

stage

2 where

water

gets heating evaporation and carbonation throughout electric heaters and cooling

pipe

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pipes

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. Carbon dioxide makes

water

more carbonated. After it gets enough carbon dioxide it drops into

Stage

3 Mixing. In 3rd

stage

, carbonated

water

reaches

mixing

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the mixing

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tank which is used to distribute

water

into 3 sections, colouring, syrup and flavor.

Water

residue goes by

filter

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the filter

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into 4th

Stage

and it

distribute

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distributes

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to bottles and cans. Before it gets to the

last

stage

, it must

be pack

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be packed

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into boxes. When

its

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it's

it is

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packed into boxes, trucks take

away

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it away

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and

delivers

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deliver

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it to

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Supermarket

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the Supermarket

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where it can be

consumpted

Correct your spelling

consumed

by people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

carbonated drinks
water cleaning
heating evaporation
carbonation
mixing tank
filtering
filling
packaging
raw water
filtration
softening
chemical treatment
heating
evaporated
carbon dioxide
coloring
sweeteners
flavorings
final beverage
impurities
bottles and cans
distributed
supermarkets
stores

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

More and more women are now going out to work and some women are now the major salary earner in the family. What are the causes of this, and what effect is this having on families and society?

Students in university should be specialized in one subject rather than to develop a wider range of knowledge in many different subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important to teach art to children? Do you think adolescent should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

The government should control the content of violence in films and on TV to decrease the level of violent crime in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?