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The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary institutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary institutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.
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The data provided by Australia's tertiary educational
centers
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 above demonstrated the distribution of male and female
students
 signed up for different fields of study in 1995.
Overall
, Engineering had the highest number of male
students
while
 Arts & Humanities field was
favored
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 by the majority of the girls. In fact, the proportion of male
students
 registered for Engineering and female counterparts in Arts
& Humanities
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and humanities
 were approximately equal.
However
, there was a significant difference in Engineering where the percentage of male
students
 was almost 5 times higher than female ones. As in Computing, a similar trend was demonstrated as 10% of male learners outweigh the 4% shown from the learners of the opposite sex.
Likewise
, the doubling figure was shown in males compared to females with roughly 14% and 7% respectively.
On the other hand
, some subject areas provide a more equal distribution between the two genders
such
 as Business Studies where the difference was relatively insubstantial,
while
 others present considerate biases from female
students
such
 as education and health. The least
favored
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 subject by female
students
 was Engineering with only around 2%
while
 for males it was Health at around 4%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tertiary institutions
  • enrolment
  • engineering
  • information technology
  • nursing
  • gender roles
  • societal expectations
  • suitability
  • caregiving roles
  • job market
  • business studies
  • gender distribution
  • gender inclusion policies
  • workplace diversity
  • gender stereotypes
  • historical trends
  • percentages
  • subjects
  • gender imbalance
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