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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar graph illustrates 10 countries that
has
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had
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 the most electrical
production
 and
consumption
 in 2014.
Overall
, it is noticeable that
China
 produces
the
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electricity
 the most. Meanwhile,
China
also
consume
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consumes
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electricity
 the most. The majority of countries have the
rate
 of electrical
production
more
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than
consumption
. The
rank
 of
consumption
 and
production
 is slightly different as Germany produces more
electricity
 than the country before its
rank
. In the first
rank
 of
production
,
China
 had the highest
rate
 of
production
 of
electricity
 in 2014, accounting for 5,398
billion
kWh
. It was followed by
United
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the United
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 States with 4,099
billion
kWh
. Between the second and third
place
, there was a big gap between them as Russia who got the third
place
 produced merely 1,057 in that year. As the
rank
 was lower, the manufacturing of
electricity
also
 declined. Korea who got the tenth
place
 produced only 485.1
billion
kWh
 in 2014. Looking at the
rate
 of
consumption
,
China
 remained
first
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place
 at 5,322
billion
kWh
, followed by
US
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the US
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 at 3,866
billion
kWh
. Interestingly, the change occurred a little in terms of
rank
 as the
rate
 of
consumption
of
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in
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 Germany was 582.5 which was higher than
Canada
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in Canada
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.
Thus
, in terms of
consumption
, Germany would move up to sixth
place
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, consumption, china, electricity, rate, rank, billion, kwh, place with synonyms.
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