The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar graph illustrates 10 countries that
has
the most electrical Wrong verb form
had
production
and consumption
in 2014.
Overall
, it is noticeable that China
produces the
Correct article usage
apply
electricity
the most. Meanwhile, China
also
consume
Change the verb form
consumes
electricity
the most. The majority of countries have the rate
of electrical production
more
than Correct quantifier usage
apply
consumption
. The rank
of consumption
and production
is slightly different as Germany produces more electricity
than the country before its rank
.
In the first rank
of production
, China
had the highest rate
of production
of electricity
in 2014, accounting for 5,398 billion
kWh
. It was followed by United
States with 4,099 Correct article usage
the United
billion
kWh
. Between the second and third place
, there was a big gap between them as Russia who got the third place
produced merely 1,057 in that year. As the rank
was lower, the manufacturing of electricity
also
declined. Korea who got the tenth place
produced only 485.1 billion
kWh
in 2014.
Looking at the rate
of consumption
, China
remained first
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in first
place
at 5,322 billion
kWh
, followed by US
at 3,866 Correct article usage
the US
billion
kWh
. Interestingly, the change occurred a little in terms of rank
as the rate
of consumption
of
Germany was 582.5 which was higher than Change preposition
in
Canada
. Change preposition
in Canada
Thus
, in terms of consumption
, Germany would move up to sixth place
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