The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The line graph illustrates the money spent on buying
books
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in the four various countries from 1995 to 2005. An
overall
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impression reveals that there has been a different trend for the amount of money spent by people from the different countries but the figures in Germany during the 10-year period remained the biggest spender on
books
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,
while
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all three other countries spent less on them. In 1995, the proportion of people in Germany buying
books
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started at 80
million
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, but
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figure
surge
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up to approximately 95
million
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by the end of the period in 2005, which is the highest spending on
books
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. Italy and France show similar trends to each other, with a fairly constant trend from 1995 to 1997, but both reached their peak by 2005 (around 65 to 75
million
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dollars, respectively).
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, Austria shows a gradual incline, starting at 30
million
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to 40
million
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between 1995 and 1999.
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it surged to a high of 70
million
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in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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