The graphs show crimes that took place in the city of Greenvale and arrests from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant。

The graphs show crimes that took place in the city of Greenvale and arrests from 2010 to 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant。
The graph provides information about the average emissions of carbon dioxide per capita in four countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
although
the UK have the highest average CO2 emission, the
output
in Sweden over the same period fell. Meanwhile, there were significant rises in the emission levels from people in Italy and Portugal. In 1967, the
productions
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in the UK
lead
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to the highest pollution level, caused by almost 11 metric
tonnes
of CO2 each. The next highest emitters were the Swedes, who
leads
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to around 8.5 metric
tonnes
each, which is two times the
output
of the average Italian, and sixteen times more than the
output
per capita in Portugal. CO2
output
fell gradually in the UK over the 40 years,
however
, and despite a surge in 1970, people in Sweden
also
cut their
emission
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dramatically until by 2007, they account for only 5 metric
tonnes
each.
By contrast
, after 1967, emissions increased from Italy and Portugal. By the end of the given period, Italy was the second highest polluter, with almost 8 metric
tonnes
, and in Portugal, though it was still the lowest emitter
along with
Sweden, just under 6 metric
tonnes
per person were generated.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words output, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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