Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical serious in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle individually and globally?

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last
two or three decades, pollution has been
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rapidly than ever before. Contamination of
air
,
water
and soil
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the
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complicated
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that
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takes millions of years to restore.
This
essay will present the main causes and a few solutions to overcome
this
trouble of an individual
as well as
global. There are some reasons behind of
this
situaions
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situation
situations
. One major
causes
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is that
factories
'
garbage
and
wastage
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waste
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are dumped into the
river
,
consequently
,
water
can be polluted and humans and animals
are
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drunk
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this
water
as drinking
water
while
human
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humans
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might
affect
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suffer
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more complicated diseases. Another reason is that companies'
garbage
and
wastage
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waste
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are dumped into
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agricultural places,
thus
, soil erosion may be polluted.
Similarly
,
factories'
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factories
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emitted
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more toxic emissions in order to CO2 can be mixed into the
air
while
air
polluted dramatically. There are some possible solutions that may
be reduced
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this
trend. One of the manageable remedies is that
factories
'
wastage
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waste
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and
garbage
should be dumped into
the
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apply
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landfills and
recycle
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stores
instead
of
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agricultural land, and
as a result
, soil and
water
contamination might be diminished.
For instance
,
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authority
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should be implemented globally
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strict rules against the
factories
'
wastage
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waste
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and
garbage
will not dumped into the
river
and agricultural land. Another possible solution is that people should use
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public transportation rather than private vehicles in order to reduce the CO2 and
air
pollution may be reduced.
To conclude
, pollution is
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serious issue across the globe; manufacturing companies'
garbage
are
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dumped into the
river
,
water
and agricultural land
as well as
factories
'
emitted
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the
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apply
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toxic emission are the reasons.
These
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wastage
should be dumped into
the
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landfills and
recycle
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recycling
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stores
as well as
globally, the authority should be taken action against the
law breaker
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who
dumped
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dump
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wastage
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waste
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into
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the river
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river
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rivers
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are the solutions of
this
tendency.
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