You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to editor of magazine Correct the information in article Explain why it is important for magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am writing to complain about an
article
which published
yesterday. In Add a missing verb
was published
article
, it was mentioned that Add an article
the article
Manchester
is not a safe city
any more.
I was born in Manchester
and i
am living there currently. Here is a very peaceful and safe Change the capitalization
I
city
where kids can play in playgrounds. You do not need
lock your flat door or you can run at midnight by yourself. Nobody will bother you. Add the particle
need to
According to
NY
Correct article usage
the NY
times
, Capitalize word
Times
this
city
is chosen 3rd
Change preposition
as 3rd
safe
Correct word choice
safest
city
in the world.
Over 1 million tourists are visiting Manchester
every year. This
city
contributes a
huge money to Remove the article
apply
Correct article usage
the UK
UK
economy thanks to Correct article usage
the UK
Replace the word
tourist
touristic
visits. Replace the word
tourist
This
article
which you published is contains
wrong information about Change the verb form
contains
Manchester
and you have destroyed Manchester
's reputation.
I would like to request that you should advertised
Wrong verb form
advertise
correction
Replace the word
the correct
article
. I would be most greatful
if you could reply as soon as possible so,Correct your spelling
grateful
this
matter can be resolved to
without misunderstanding.
Yours Faithfully,
Merve KerküklüChange preposition
apply
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single idea per paragraph
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suitable writing tone
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