the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day grom 2003-2006.
A glance at the bar diagram above presents the amount of
internet
consumption by age group from 2003 to 2006.
Overall
, it is shown that people who were 16-24 years
old used the internet
most compared to other categories. Opposite with that, persons who were older than 65 years
old marked the lowest point at below 20%.
According to
the data, young people under 25 commenced at 80% in 2003 and then
surged dramatically to 100% in 2005. Furthermore
, adults who were 25-54 years
old grew stable in using the internet
each year in the given period to the maximum point of 80% in 2006. Different from that, the 55-64 group went up and down in 3 years
before increasing significantly to approximately 50% by 2006. Likewise
, the oldest ones who were above 65 declined in 2004 but then
increased to 20% in 2005.
To conclude
, it is apparent that younger groups were more active in consuming the internet
which always hit the dominant number each year.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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